Comment and critique poem?

I am among the lucky ones to read your poems. An impressive token of demure eclectic female poetry. Excellent! "needs fire..." Probably because after the fire, earth starts re creating flora? I will unearth you and breath dust if you promise me you 'll come back to write regularly. My wind will whir your form among ashes and new floras, so you 'll re establish your Phoenix of composing! Right? Right! Thank you!